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Post by Windheart on Apr 9, 2007 10:30:03 GMT -5
Pleeeeeeeeeze dont put posts up unless u r checking my bio.
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Post by Admin on Apr 9, 2007 20:22:56 GMT -5
That was very good! The only problem is that your name and position don't match. If you want to be a kit you have to be Diamondkit. If you want the name Diamondfur you have to be a warrior (or a medicine cat, deputy, or elder)
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Post by Windheart on Apr 10, 2007 6:37:54 GMT -5
and u know how in the rules it says ur not allowed 2 kill other cats?well is my IC ok?i only killed blackheart becaus he killed my mom.
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Post by Windheart on Apr 10, 2007 6:38:57 GMT -5
does Moonclan have a deputy?
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Post by Windheart on Apr 10, 2007 6:49:13 GMT -5
Name: Diamondfur
Clan: Moonclan
Position: former deputy;now starclan warrior
Gender: She-cat
Description: White with gray/silver spots with dark blue eyes. has a torn ear and scarred muzzle. tip of tail is mising from a fight with a fox.
Personality: loyal, although sometimes a little stubborn and difficult. Likes going into twoleg gardens, but when the twoleg comes out runs away.
History: born from a kittypet mother named Patches, but Patches’ mate was from Moonclan,(his name was Coalfoot)and he brought me back to Moonclan. IC: She looked desparetly at the limp body of her beloved mother, Patches, that lay in front of her, bloody in the grass. She turned to glare furiously at the loner, Blackheart, formerly of Jungleclan. ”How dare you kill my mother!” She snarled furiously at him. ”She was a kittypet. Why should she live?” he said ”She was my mother!” she yowled again, her fur bristling ,this time ready to lunge at him .”I don’t care. That filthy clanmate of yours, Mistywing ,killed my mother!” She suddenly remembered that night when Jungleclan and Moonclan had battled .She had watched Mistywing bite down into Poppyface’s throat, and Poppyface went limp. Suddenly she felt anger burn up inside her again. ”Your mother was a traitor! Surley you remember when she tried to attack your leader ,Smallstar,!” This time,she did lunge at him. He lay underneath her, struggling in vain. She bit into his throat as hard as she could and then she felt him go limp. She stood up, and smelled the unmistakable scents of blood and death. It was over. Blackheart was dead.
Codeword: [glow=red,2,300]Checked!![/glow]
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Post by Windheart on Apr 10, 2007 14:42:32 GMT -5
is that better?
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Post by Windheart on Apr 10, 2007 14:42:56 GMT -5
hope it is.LOL:)
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Gingerstar
Warrior
Breeze Clan leader (Admin)
The best things in life are better left unseen thats why we close our eyes to cry, kiss and dream...
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Post by Gingerstar on Apr 10, 2007 14:47:27 GMT -5
hey diamondfur that was good mine was a troble too...
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Post by Windheart on Apr 10, 2007 14:52:26 GMT -5
who cares?i think ur asome.
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Post by Admin on Apr 17, 2007 18:07:00 GMT -5
Accepted!
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Post by Windheart on Apr 17, 2007 18:44:51 GMT -5
thx! the only problem is i just remembered thundy is also moonclans deputy!!!! i ll change it 2 warrior right now.
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Post by Admin on Apr 19, 2007 15:38:58 GMT -5
Really!? I didn't know that!
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Post by Windheart on Apr 25, 2007 6:38:36 GMT -5
look in her sig!!! it says:"thunderstar,leader of jungleclan moonheart, deputy of moonclan"
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Post by Admin on Apr 25, 2007 17:31:54 GMT -5
No it says: Moonheart, deputy of rainclan
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Post by Windheart on Apr 25, 2007 17:56:52 GMT -5
ooooooooooo.. can i still be deputy of moonclan then?!?!?!!?!??!!??**purs exitedly**
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Post by Admin on Apr 26, 2007 20:34:49 GMT -5
Of Course!
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Post by Gingerclaw on Apr 26, 2007 21:04:22 GMT -5
*tail droups* darn.. *perks-up* oh well! i'll just be third in comand! lol
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Post by Gingerclaw on Apr 26, 2007 21:05:20 GMT -5
it is fair because she's on more than me but oh well! she'll be a good deputy anyways!
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Post by Admin on Apr 26, 2007 21:49:46 GMT -5
You can always be deputy or medicine cat to another clan. You can have more than one character
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Post by Gingerclaw on Apr 26, 2007 21:56:08 GMT -5
oh good point.. Hmm *smiles misceviously*
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