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Post by Midnightfur on Apr 29, 2007 19:36:51 GMT -5
name:Midnightfur clan:moon clan position:medicine cat gender:she-cat description:black cat,pink nose,white frontpaws,leaf green eyes. persolnality:very friendly,cares alot about her clan, could get grumpy if u bug her. She loves to go to mothermouth to share tongs with starclan.She is a fierce fighter and dosin't let the enemy go unless he or she is badly wounded. history:i was born in moon clan and i will stay in moonclan for life.mother:stormface,father:nightfang. ic:Midnight was on her way to Mothermouth to share dreams with starclan. on her way there she could smell cat from another clan, midnight opend her mouth to taste the air, it was rainclan!Thankfully there was only one. A big brown taby tom steped out of the bushes "oh, now who do we have here?"the tom asked viciously,"im on my way to mothermouth,now get out of my sight!"Mindnight hissed,"i dont think ure going eneywhere you furball"said the tom,"im going to kill u!"the tom growled," you wouldn't dare attack a medicine cat,its against the warrior code!"mindnight growled.Midnight didin't wait for a reply and continued her way to the mothermouth. code:[glow=red,2,300]Checked![/glow]
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Post by Admin on Apr 29, 2007 19:39:16 GMT -5
the code is wrong.
Also can you do a bit better on the history and personality. the personality especially. that could describe anyone in the world.
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Post by Admin on Apr 29, 2007 19:40:54 GMT -5
and you need a warrior's name. (ex: Midnightfur)
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Post by Midnightfur on Apr 29, 2007 19:50:01 GMT -5
ok my name is midnightfur
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Post by Midnightfur on Apr 29, 2007 19:50:55 GMT -5
were do i find the code
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Post by Admin on Apr 29, 2007 21:04:03 GMT -5
in the rules
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Gingerstar
Warrior
Breeze Clan leader (Admin)
The best things in life are better left unseen thats why we close our eyes to cry, kiss and dream...
Posts: 330
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Post by Gingerstar on Apr 30, 2007 7:41:36 GMT -5
hi midnightfur..... i am gingerstar LEADER OF BREEZE CLAN do u have an account yet..
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Post by Midnightfur on Apr 30, 2007 18:32:27 GMT -5
yes i have an acout but i just need the code to be accepted
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Post by Windheart on May 1, 2007 5:56:37 GMT -5
u can find the code in this thing called genaral rules.(hint: it starts with a g)
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Post by Admin on May 1, 2007 15:48:48 GMT -5
still wrong and the eating thing doesn't count.
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Post by snowfeather on May 1, 2007 16:58:22 GMT -5
Hello, Midnightfur. I'm Snowfeather, but Snowy for short.
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Post by Windheart on May 1, 2007 17:45:23 GMT -5
ya. every1 calls him snowy. here r all the nicknames: snowfeather(snowy) me(diamond) featherstar~silverfeather(feather)gingerpaw(ginger)emaraldfur(emarald)and a couple of others. and, i know im posting this alot, but, will u guys PLEEEEEEZE join?!?!?!?! whitestarowlfur.proboards59.com
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Post by Midnightfur on May 1, 2007 18:13:52 GMT -5
give me another hint diamond plz, or at least wich sentence
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Post by Midnightfur on May 1, 2007 18:22:23 GMT -5
i found the code so u could chek my bio and accept me to be ure medicin cat!
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Post by Admin on May 1, 2007 19:21:07 GMT -5
Okay, now just add something REAL to your personality!! Look at my bio or other's for ideas. Sorry, but knowing what you don't and do like to eat doesn't make the cut!
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Post by Midnightfur on May 1, 2007 20:18:52 GMT -5
im done now u could accept me!!!
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Post by Admin on May 1, 2007 20:39:28 GMT -5
I'll be the judge of that. The only thing is that medicine cat's don't really fight much ya know and if they did they wouldn't want anyone to die... If you could just take the dying part out that'd be better. Sorry, I'm being really picky but this is just how I get around this time of year.
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Post by Midnightfur on May 1, 2007 20:41:16 GMT -5
im done!!
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Post by Midnightfur on May 1, 2007 20:41:41 GMT -5
plz accept!!!
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Post by Admin on May 1, 2007 20:50:46 GMT -5
Okay but you didn't end the sentence!!!!!!!! I'm sorry but that is like seriously one of the things that bugs me the most! You just can't leave the readers hanging. What if that was a book you were writing. Would honestly end a paragraph with "And Doesn't let the Enemy..."
It's Incomplete! Pretend like you're writing a paper for your picky english teacher!! I'm the teacher and you're obviously the writer!
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