Midnightfur~MoonClan

[Midnightfur]

name:Midnightfur
clan:moon clan
position:medicine cat
gender:she-cat
description:black cat,pink nose,white frontpaws,leaf green eyes.
persolnality:very friendly,cares alot about her clan, could get grumpy if u bug her. She loves to go to mothermouth to share tongs with starclan.She is a fierce fighter and dosin't let the enemy go unless he or she is badly wounded.
history:i was born in moon clan and i will stay in moonclan for life.mother:stormface,father:nightfang.
ic:Midnight was on her way to Mothermouth to share dreams with starclan. on her way there she could smell cat from another clan, midnight opend her mouth to taste the air, it was rainclan!Thankfully there was only one. A big brown taby tom steped out of the bushes "oh, now who do we have here?"the tom asked viciously,"im on my way to mothermouth,now get out of my sight!"Mindnight hissed,"i dont think ure going eneywhere you furball"said the tom,"im going to kill u!"the tom growled," you wouldn't dare attack a medicine cat,its against the warrior code!"mindnight growled.Midnight didin't wait for a reply and continued her way to the mothermouth.
code:[glow=red,2,300]Checked![/glow]

[Admin]

the code is wrong.

Also can you do a bit better on the history and personality. the personality especially. that could describe anyone in the world.

[Admin]

and you need a warrior's name. (ex: Midnightfur)

[Midnightfur]

ok my name is midnightfur

[Midnightfur]

were do i find the code

[Admin]

in the rules

[Gingerstar]

hi midnightfur..... i am gingerstar LEADER OF BREEZE CLAN do u have an account yet..

[Midnightfur]

yes i have an acout but i just need the code to be accepted

[Windheart]

u can find the code in this thing called genaral rules.(hint: it starts with a g)

[Admin]

still wrong and the eating thing doesn't count.

[snowfeather]

Hello, Midnightfur. I'm Snowfeather, but Snowy for short.

[Windheart]

ya. every1 calls him snowy. here r all the nicknames: snowfeather(snowy) me(diamond) featherstar~silverfeather(feather)gingerpaw(ginger)emaraldfur(emarald)and a couple of others. and, i know im posting this alot, but, will u guys PLEEEEEEZE join?!?!?!?! whitestarowlfur.proboards59.com

[Midnightfur]

give me another hint diamond plz, or at least wich sentence

[Midnightfur]

i found the code so u could chek my bio and accept me to be ure medicin cat!

[Admin]

Okay, now just add something REAL to your personality!! Look at my bio or other's for ideas. Sorry, but knowing what you don't and do like to eat doesn't make the cut!

[Midnightfur]

im done now u could accept me!!!

[Admin]

I'll be the judge of that. The only thing is that medicine cat's don't really fight much ya know and if they did they wouldn't want anyone to die... If you could just take the dying part out that'd be better. Sorry, I'm being really picky but this is just how I get around this time of year.

[Midnightfur]

im done!!

[Midnightfur]

plz accept!!!

[Admin]

Okay but you didn't end the sentence!!!!!!!! I'm sorry but that is like seriously one of the things that bugs me the most! You just can't leave the readers hanging. What if that was a book you were writing. Would honestly end a paragraph with "And Doesn't let the Enemy..."

It's Incomplete! Pretend like you're writing a paper for your picky english teacher!! I'm the teacher and you're obviously the writer!